One of my best gift.......
No one can ever clam it...
It belongs to us.......
Until it spreads its wings
We cant leave
We cant walk out
For God has assigned
Us to take control......
Not perfect
Nor can become one......
All we can do is
Make thing better
A better world
To fly free....
For no one less to depend on......
Poetry Jam
Love this, the honesty, emotion, and sense of longing. Very nicely written.
ReplyDeleteA child is a wonderful gift. I really liked your optimistic ending and the words about making the world a better place and flying free.
ReplyDeleteour children are def a gift...and we have a responsibility to them for sure...and i only hope we could make it a better world...
ReplyDeleteGod has not only gifted but assigned a task as well.....a beautiful reminder to that.... :)
ReplyDeleteultimate gift- wonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteThis is beautiful .... the best gift :-)
ReplyDeleteaww..this is so lovely! God bless....:)
ReplyDeleteChildren are indeed the best gifts of all!
ReplyDeleteThe nice part is how much you love and appreciate your gift!
ReplyDeleteSo true! The best gift ever, really felt and enjoyed the love in this :-)
ReplyDeleteSometimes just right is more apt than perfect..
ReplyDeleteYou speak a common truth. Well done.
ReplyDeleteexcellent write on the one great gift.. the only thing wrong with a child is they grow up far to quickly...
ReplyDeleteYour words, so real and honest, present well the task of parenthood!
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