Heat getting in the way
Running towards the water play
Salish a splash our way..........
through the smooth sandy bay
Wish to have a ocean spray
In the deserted its only oasis stay
As animals travel to watering hole
I run down the sandy forms
To the little water pole
Wonder how......
Water pore in the dry shore...........
There is a turn in the middle and that leaves thoughts of what began as a play in water. Why not try expand it? just a suggestion!
ReplyDeleteWill do part 2............Thanks Akila G
DeleteYes, in heat there must be refreshing water to play in. = )
ReplyDeleteBeautiful photo and very refreshing poem :-)
ReplyDeleteThe thought of water play is refreshing in the midst of a summer afternoon.
ReplyDeleteReally lovely poem that matches the picture, very nice
ReplyDeleteThat water looks like it would be so refreshing to stand other in the summer heat!
ReplyDeleteThe sight of water on a hot day is so refreshing.
ReplyDeleteI love the thought of splashing in water on a hot day! Thank you for posting here at Poetry Jam!!
ReplyDeleteHappy splashing to you!
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